Translation Craft

What will not go into English, and what to do about it

📑 In This Lesson

  1. Four things that will not transfer
  2. Focus is not voice
  3. The particles that vanish
  4. The standing traps
  5. Three strategies
  6. A worked example
  7. Practice

1. Four things that will not transfer

Kapampangan hasEnglish hasThe mismatch
focusvoiceEnglish voice is marked; Kapampangan focus is not
aspecttenseKapampangan asks "finished?", English asks "when?"
no copula"is"English must supply a word that is not there
lexical particlesintonation, adverbsEnglish has no dedicated forms

Every one of these means a translation is making a choice the original did not have to make.

2. Focus is not voice

B1 lesson 12 warned against reading object focus as the passive. Here is what it costs in practice.

Isulat ne ning lalaki ing poesia.

→ "The poem will be written by the boy."   Accurate in structure. Wrong in register — the English is stilted and the Kapampangan is not.

→ "The boy will write the poem."   Natural English. Loses the fact that the poem is what the sentence is about.

Neither is wrong. The first preserves information structure and sacrifices naturalness; the second does the reverse. What you must not do is pick one and forget you chose.

The same applies to aspect. Dintang ya and Dintang ne both come out as "he arrived" unless you deliberately reach for "he has arrived" — and beginner lesson 5 showed that the difference is real.

3. The particles that vanish

B2 lesson 14's frames are the clearest demonstration. Every one of these is Wa, "yes":

KapampanganUsual translationWhat is lost
WaYes.—
Wa pinYes.emphasis, certainty
Wa palaYes.the speaker has just realised
Wa kanuYes.it is second-hand
Wa sanaYes.it is hoped, not known
Wa ruguYes.sympathy or humility

A translator who renders all six as "yes" has produced six accurate sentences and lost the entire attitudinal layer of the passage.

rugu is the hard case. Forman glosses it "[+sympathy or humility]" — a feature in brackets, not a word, because English has no word.

4. The standing traps

Each of these has caught this course at least once.

FormThe trapLesson
susulat"is writing", not "will write" — the reverse of Tagalogbeginner 11
maka-polysemous; both stative and potentialC1 lesson 7
ini / itisources disagree on which is whichbeginner 6
ati / atinone letter separates "is at" from "has"beginner 10
doubled rootsusually diminish, not intensifyC1 lesson 5
mecatlon metung21, not 31 — counting runs forwardC2 lesson 11

The doubled-root one is worth singling out. Translating matamad-tamad ya as "he is very lazy" rather than "he is a bit lazy" inverts the sentence, and it is a natural mistake for an English speaker to make.

5. Three strategies

Compensate

Put the lost force somewhere else in the English sentence. Wa kanu becomes "Yes, apparently" or "So they say." Wa rugu might become "Yes, poor thing" — clumsier than the Kapampangan, but it carries the feeling.

Annotate

For scholarly work, translate plainly and put what cannot be carried in a note. This is what Forman does with [+sympathy or humility] — he does not pretend to a word he does not have.

Gloss, then render

Two passes. First a structural gloss that shows the morphology; then an English sentence. The gloss is where the grammar is visible; the rendering is where it reads.

🌱 Smoothness is not accuracy

A translation that reads beautifully and drops every particle is not obviously better than a clumsier one that keeps them. It is a different trade.

Be able to say which trade you made. "I translated for naturalness and lost the evidential marking" is a professional statement. "This is what it means" usually is not.

6. A worked example

From B2 lesson 15, one of Forman's own sentences:

Buri ra kang paglapakan oneng e ra ka agyu uling maragul ka.

Gloss: want they you-ACC beat-GF but not they you able because big you

Forman's rendering: "They would like to beat you up, but they can't overcome you because you're big."

FeatureKept?
three-clause structureyes
oneng as contrastiveyes — "but"
uling as causalyes — "because"
the fused pronouns ra kano — English needs two words
goal focus on paglapakanno — rendered as active

A good translation that loses two things, both structural rather than semantic. That is usually the right trade for a reader, and the wrong one for a linguist.

7. Practice

Exercise 1: What is lost?

  • Wa kanu loses the fact that it is ___ (Answer: second-hand|reported|hearsay)
  • Wa pala loses that the speaker has just ___ (Answer: realised|realized)
  • Wa rugu loses ___ (Answer: sympathy)

Exercise 2: The traps

  • susulat means "is ___" (Answer: writing)
  • matamad-tamad means "a ___ lazy" (Answer: bit|little)
  • mecatlon metung is ___ (Answer: 21|twenty-one)

Exercise 3: Categories

  • Focus is not ___ (Answer: voice)
  • Aspect is not ___ (Answer: tense)
  • Kapampangan has no ___ (Answer: copula)

Exercise 4: Strategies

  • Putting the lost force elsewhere in the sentence is called ___ (Answer: compensating|compensate)
  • Putting it in a note instead is ___ (Answer: annotating|annotate)

❓ Common Questions at This Stage

Is there a right answer? No — there is a defensible one, and it depends who the translation is for.

Should I keep the particles in English? Usually not literally. "Yes indeed-sympathy" helps nobody. Compensate or annotate.

How do I get better at this? Translate the same passage twice, once for a reader and once for a linguist, and notice what each version throws away.

Why This Lesson Matters

Most of what anyone outside Pampanga will ever know about Kapampangan comes through translation. Being able to see what a translation dropped is the difference between reading the language and reading about it.

Next, and last: Language, Identity and What Is Not Known.